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If the last poem gave you hunger pangs and the end product (learnt that from today's biology class) was a very unpeasant craving of a humongous ice-crea with creamy praline swirls, I'd like to apologize, but looking sunny side up, take it as a patience compatibality test, if you end up having one of those delicious snow-cones in your hands, you win!
OKEY DOKEY, TIME NOW FOR ANOTHER POEM,
this is an oldie, and last one is similar to this, again, my hearty apologies to food-a-holics.
here goes,
my world of fantasy
When i am bored sitting all day long
i always fall into my magical world
which is perfect for kids like me!
that has sweet milk waterfalls to taste
and irresistable chocolatey rivers to drink
The mountain tops are flooding with icecream
which glisten in the dancing sunrays
pearl-like droplets on leaves
daisy heads come out popping, pale yellow primroses
flowers all round
everywhere only spring can be found
butterflies flutter and birds twitter
merrily singing and dancing sucking nectar
to make flowing rivers of honey and maple
the house boats made of mango slices and oars made of long jalebis
so that you can eat them scrumptiously any time!
strawberries floating on cream streams
with delicious peaches to enhance its taste
gulab jamoons growing on trees and laddoos popping out from flowers
lollipops will make magnificent fences and candy can make wonderful barns
chilled watermelons and beds of roses will be perfectly stupendous
Horizons of pineapple make splendid panaromas;
the sea of bluberry juice ought to be tried
with a juicy splash try the lemonade squash
Gatorade awaits you,fountains and sprinklers of roohafza
glass candy will do for window panes and pies for doors
Freshly made bread will come flying to you
delight will engulf you
it will never fail your anticipation, i promise
theres no more you could ask for
in this magical world of mine
for everything is simply spectacular
to be entirely overwhelmed
so come to my land will you?
and just try it yourself!
nashwa majeed khan
11yrs
When i am bored sitting all day long
i always fall into my magical world
which is perfect for kids like me!
that has sweet milk waterfalls to taste
and irresistable chocolatey rivers to drink
The mountain tops are flooding with icecream
which glisten in the dancing sunrays
pearl-like droplets on leaves
daisy heads come out popping, pale yellow primroses
flowers all round
everywhere only spring can be found
butterflies flutter and birds twitter
merrily singing and dancing sucking nectar
to make flowing rivers of honey and maple
the house boats made of mango slices and oars made of long jalebis
so that you can eat them scrumptiously any time!
strawberries floating on cream streams
with delicious peaches to enhance its taste
gulab jamoons growing on trees and laddoos popping out from flowers
lollipops will make magnificent fences and candy can make wonderful barns
chilled watermelons and beds of roses will be perfectly stupendous
Horizons of pineapple make splendid panaromas;
the sea of bluberry juice ought to be tried
with a juicy splash try the lemonade squash
Gatorade awaits you,fountains and sprinklers of roohafza
glass candy will do for window panes and pies for doors
Freshly made bread will come flying to you
delight will engulf you
it will never fail your anticipation, i promise
theres no more you could ask for
in this magical world of mine
for everything is simply spectacular
to be entirely overwhelmed
so come to my land will you?
and just try it yourself!
nashwa majeed khan
11yrs
It's no state of art, I admit, but please be considerate, I was 11, and I was undoubtedly in a cheesy mood that time, and I really like this one even though it has kiddo stuff in it, becuase my mom simply adores it!!!!! :)
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